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On the Road
Contributed by
minnesotarose
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Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 05:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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On the Road
Facing the wall in a cheap hotel
I'm haunted off and on
By the twisted piping
Of a neon sign
Flashing outside the window.
It winds around my head
Like impressions of you
Suddenly here -
And gone -
Dissolving into black.
We could be breathing
Side-by-side
In rhythm with the sign,
Our thoughts
One continuous line
Of elaborate luminous script,
But you are as distant to me
As the muffled sounds
Of some unseen highway
Drifting in through the open window
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2002-10-27 17:45:00]
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Re: On the Road
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 10:42:59 PM AEST
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| I like this seeing as my husband is an over the road truck driver! Christina |
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Re: On the Road
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by Daniel on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 06:19:05 AM AEST
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| truck driver... huminah. this has brought a new light of being on the road for me. interesting, i like it. kudos! ;0) -daniel |
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