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Losing Control
Contributed by
lilblkcat
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Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 02:38:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I see you from across the room
Youre looking by my way
Oh how much I hate you
I wish youd go away
I remember the times you hurt me
You make me want to scream
But in my time of desperate needs
You always were on my team
I cant recall how we met
Its seems like such a blur
I just had a hard day
And suddenly there you were
Youve got this thing about you
Its as if you were a drug
Ive become so addicted to you
I just cant pull the plug
But its an uphill battle
One I never win
You seem to have control of me
I can see your evil grin
Theres no use in fighting it
I am under your command
I walk to you from across the room
Its as though you had this planned
Today was different though
I think you had enough
You caught me by the throat
And dared me to call your bluff
I stared directly at you
You didnt even twitch
You knew it was going to be today
Thats when you flicked the switch
The room began to get so dim
I felt warm throughout
Even though I wanted to
I wasnt able to shout
Right before all faded black
I gripped you in my hand
How can a knife control some one
And put them where they stand?
Copyright ©
lilblkcat
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2004-07-23 02:38:35]
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Re: Losing Control
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by screwup on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 04:18:05 PM AEST
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| very, very well written...i understand this completely...and it is like an addiction. you put the words to it very well. |
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