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Stitches
Contributed by
xlooseroftomorrowx
on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 05:04:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I move down the hall,pretending now.
I can't stand to be here anymore.
Everything and nothing ever changes.
While i stare through the blur in my mind.
It was never like me to crawl on my knees.
Or beg you stop,ending with please.
Now i see,this is my life.
A puppet thrown from the light.
Falling into shadows,and wondering why.
Straing,gazing,at the fading sky.
And it was you who sewed my eyes on.
And put in my stuffing,and sewed in my hair.
And it was you who sewed my mouth shut,
and didn't seem to care.
Now it's like its not reality,like if i could scream
if i could open my mouth if i could breath
if i could undo the stitches i would start to scream
while im kicking at the plastick
and pulling away the wires
the light at the end of the tunnel is getting brighter
this box is sealed too tight,i cant breath
red and black lights circle in my mind
i still cant breath,my mask is too tight
everything is gray,and the pain wont go away,
is my box forever ment to stay closed this way?
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2004-07-23 05:04:45]
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Re: Stitches
(User Rating: 1 )
by willow_tara72002 on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 03:17:58 PM AEST
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Hey. This ones good. I like how you used a puppet to explain what its like to be you. I hope things get better for you. take care.
-Amber |
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Re: Stitches
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by grip-wth-broken-fingers on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 09:14:56 AM AEST
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| excellent use of desciption strong emotions i like it keep doin what u do lol xgripx |
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