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The surface of the depths of my hell
Contributed by
little_genna
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Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 06:43:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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You dont even notice your daughters cries of pain. Did you see the blood stain? See the cuts I bare on my arm. Did you even realize that your precious daughter likes to self-harm. Thinking I have my head together and such like, You all may consider this all very dreamlike. Try living in my head then it all becomes very real, Do you truly think I could be this cheerful? This is just a show for you all to be taken in by, Just a constant lie. Lets take you into the inner depths of my hell, Mind your step there is no sign to tell, I would turn a light on, but Im sorry to say they all burnt out, Now is the time if you feel like you should pullout. So now get ready to face my demons, To feel them scream with hatred and pain, dont listen to their summons. Dont get to close or else youll end up like me, That is something you dont need to feel or see. Hold on tight were about to hit a huge descent. My demons want you out they are hell bent. I cant blame Them no one should get to close to me, Please stay away from the boundary. Stay away, youre hurting me, go now never come back, Oh dear there is the first crack. I thought everything was patched up, You did it again. You messed up! Dont worry Im not talking to you, just one of my demons, Pain. Oh damn another bloodstain. Now we should leave, You have seen enough just go never come back, LEAVE!
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Re: The surface of the depths of my hell
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lost_Shadow on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 07:03:24 AM AEST (User
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Very powerful, I love it. You know what Imean. I understand the torment you are going thru |
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Re: The surface of the depths of my hell
(User Rating: 1 ) by gery_giggles on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 07:41:16 AM AEST (User
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i know what this is like...very dark and truthful. great write,it drew me in
luv always |
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Re: The surface of the depths of my hell
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 08:22:24 AM AEST (User
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awww hun *hugs you* I know of this pain you talk about in your write.... very dark and honest...
pixie xx |
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Re: The surface of the depths of my hell
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 05:07:19 PM AEST (User
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Wow, I can totally relate to this. You're first few lines dragged me in and the rest pulled me under. You wrote this so perfectly that its beautiful.
Take care
- Becca |
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