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Behind her Eyes
Contributed by
_Raspberry_
on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 10:24:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
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She sits alone
Feeling like the world has gone
With or without love
She's been alone all along
She has hurt herself again
Needs to apologize
Pain fixes the way they've hurt her
When they don't realize
Bleeding lines
Of crimson red
Makeup hides
The tears she's shed
She is swallowed
By the touch of pain
Drowning
In the bleeding rain
No one, she feels
Could undertand
The freedom of injury
By your own hand
She knows inside how bad it is
Needs to apologize
For the things she feels the need to do
...The pain behind her eyes
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2004-07-23 10:24:45]
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Re: Behind her Eyes
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by pixie on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 10:30:07 AM AEST
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Awwww this is a very sad write Raspberry *hugs you* you have worded it very well, your flow is great, the poem is great.
you can see pain in peoples eyes as they are the mirror to our souls...
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Re: Behind her Eyes
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by BrandySwanson on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 10:34:01 AM AEST
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very sad. pixie is right you can see pain in peoples eyes as they are the mirror to our souls...wonderfully written good job
Brandy |
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