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Beautiful
Contributed by
whoelse
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Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 01:59:27 PM in AEST
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"you're beautiful", they say.
I will smile and nod my head
twirl my ring around my finger
and look down at my knees.
Those knees that are not beautiful,
Those legs that aren't thin.
That hand I run through dull brown hair,
It's something to be changed.
You can tell me that I'm beautiful,
But you can't change my mind.
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Re: Beautiful
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 02:25:10 PM AEST
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I feel sure that if people tell you that you are beautiful, you probably are. We seem to be our own worst critics. Maybe you should take a less critical look at yourself.
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Re: Beautiful
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by LoserLottie on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 03:03:35 PM AEST
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| It's a fantastic poem. I don't know if it is fiction or not. But either way, the mood that you set is very deep and i admire the forwardness of it. If you have a chance please read my poems and post a comment. xxx |
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