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When I
Contributed by
MoonbeamBaby
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Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 02:23:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When I say your name the waters part
The skys are blue and not a bit dark
The sunshine falls on top of me
your name is a whisper in the trees
your the shadows on the ground
your everywhere and all around
When I get loney you are the wind
you surround me your my best friend
I love you and you should know
Derrick you are evrything to me
When I say your name your what I see.
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MoonbeamBaby
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2004-07-23 14:23:08]
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Re: When I
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by LoserLottie on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 03:16:51 PM AEST
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| Its really good. the ending isn't a very clear ending which makes the poem unique. well done. if u have a chance please read my poetry and leave a comment. xxx |
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Re: When I
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 05:47:59 PM AEST
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| this is adorable... good job! |
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