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Inside She Feels So Empty
Contributed by
MyLastBreath
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Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 12:48:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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She gets a beat
Inside her mind
She needs to get it out
It keeps playing
Never to cease
She hides behind her drums
With tears dripping to her feet
Banging and Banging
Her drumsticks are slipping out of grip
From the sweat
She fights for her passion
She fights for her ambition
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MyLastBreath
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2004-07-24 00:48:53]
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Re: Inside She Feels So Empty
(User Rating: 1 )
by nexxa on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 01:32:56 AM AEST
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very nice write feels like a story to me and I wonder what more is to come.
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Re: Inside She Feels So Empty
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 11:37:45 AM AEST
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Very good write. I liked this
Kimberly :) |
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