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Downpour
Contributed by
kyletycz
on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 01:34:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Rain
Like tin angels falling down
Here in heavens tears
Is where we all shall drown
Rain
It's our life's saving grace
Here to come and here to go
It's here to make us ache
Rain
In this everlasting, earthly wasteland
Heavens war against the hell
A snowy fiery blizzard
Rain
Like life's true escape
This trembling teary sky
Of the blandness that it makes
Rain
Drops of sunny dew
Bringing heavenly life
Killing us meanwhile too
Rain
Quietly all of us sing
Of plaguing corruption
With senses not so keen
Rain
All the sinners in the town
Washing away their shame
Meanwhile, none make a sound
Rain
Drops of sun amung the night
Pulling emotions to and fro
Happy torture all in spite
Rain
Tiny prisms in the sun
Invoking every emotion
Any emotion, in everyone
Rain
As tomarow's babies crawl
They all grow up to walk
But only walk to fall
Rain
It will wash away our lies
It will fall from the heavens
It will take away our lives
Copyright ©
kyletycz
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2004-07-24 01:34:12]
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Re: Downpour
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by darkplaidbabe on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 02:50:52 PM AEST
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this poem is simply beautiful. very beautiful. it has been raining here for the last three months and it is so pretty yet so tragic. it is more than just rain also, it is emotion, its a feeling here. it affects everything. beautiful.
brynna
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Re: Downpour
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by rao0oar on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 02:50:22 AM AEST
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| i love the rain i never miss my chance too go out and play in it......this is an awesome poem i love it |
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