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Written to Remember
Contributed by
Jellybellyprincess
on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 12:23:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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How can you tell me to remember you?
Seems to me that remembering implies leaving
How can you leave me like this?
Seems to me that you've come to a conclusion
How can you conclude something such as this?
Seems to me to be something undefinable
And you know what that means---
Undefinable
to
Infinite
to
Unreachable
to
Gone
You never really said it
but I knew it was something you wanted
You did say that you were willing to wait for her
I nodded
You looked away
And we left it at that
The silence seemed to fill more than
just the empty corner we occupied in that moment
That's where it went down in history
Down in memory
Down
Down
Down
You had to choose
You knew that
I had yet to find that out
But none the less...
You were willing to wait for her
"REMEMBER ME..."
is what you wrote
And I believe you
when you say that a book once closed
can be re-opened
So I will remember you
And I hope you will remember me as well
Time it was
That the road diverged
Never forget the dream you passed along the way
Copyright ©
Jellybellyprincess
... [
2004-07-24 12:23:40]
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Re: Written to Remember
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 01:07:51 PM AEST
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This was great!
I especially love the last line!
Wonderful! |
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Re: Written to Remember
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by pyro_88 on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 07:27:36 PM AEST
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| great poem. it reminded me of someone very special to me. keep em coming. |
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Re: Written to Remember
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by pvd on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 11:57:14 AM AEST
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Love the construct of stanzaand the lines:
"The silence seemed to fill more than
just the empty corner we occupied in that moment
That's where it went down in history
Down in memory
Down
Down
Down"
Good work.
PVD
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Re: Written to Remember
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 02:01:49 AM AEST
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| Great poem. I especially like the last line. very powerful. |
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Re: Written to Remember
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by whisper-of-night on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 05:55:52 PM AEST
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| hi princess! still remember me? it had been such a long long time since we last talked, I miss talking to ya, drop by sometimes if you can okay? Miss you lots.... :o) |
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