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Trust
Contributed by
Bruce
on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 12:45:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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If you love me like you say
then you must trust in me
Never could I hurt you
you have my guarantee
I don't take this promise lightly
and I never break my word
Listen very closely
make sure these words are heard
You know that I love you
and of this you can be sure
But you in turn my love
must also feel secure
I have given you my word
I hope it is enough
But if it doesn't suit you
the going will be rough
This is the last word I will say
you will not hear any more
It is up to you now
if this relationship is to endure
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2004-07-24 12:45:02]
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Re: Trust
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by nexxa on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 12:58:49 PM AEST
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Hi Bruce you romantic you this just adds to the list of another well done write I am also going thru some more of your poems and me thinks you are Mr. Romantic it is so nice to see that a man can write of love and in such a sincere way.
Thank you once again for you words.
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Re: Trust
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by pixie on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 01:03:51 PM AEST
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yes you are Mr.Romantic :) your poems are brimming with emotion, love and feeling, they are always written so wonderfully
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Trust
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 01:14:53 PM AEST
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I so hope she decides to accept your offer of love. What a lovely poem.
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Re: Trust
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by BrandySwanson on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 07:45:50 PM AEST
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your words here are simply beautiful. I love it and I too hope she accepts your offer in love. wonderful job. thanks for sharing this beautiful poem
Brandy |
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Re: Trust
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 10:35:24 AM AEST
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i read this last night and i wasnt sure what it was upset me in it, coming back and reading it this morning, i know it was that my aussie x had said these words to me, and they were untrue, ...looking past those feelings, and being more clear headed; i find your poem from a genuine heart and it is a very beautiful poem:) sorry i rambled lol, hugs n' love nessa
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