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hate and love
Contributed by
trustisajoke
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Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 05:28:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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i hate you for what youve done to me
but i love you for who you are
i hate it how you lied to me
but i love how weve come so far
i hate it how i feel your pain
deep inside my heart
but i love it how you feel mine too
and hold me in your arms
i hate it when you make me cry
but i it love how you care
i hate it how you say goodbye
but i love it how we tried
-Tracey
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Re: hate and love
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 05:41:21 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, Tracey! This is a great first post... it's very relatable for many of us, I think - it does feel good AND bad sometimes.
Thanks for sharing this.... I'm looking forward to reading more of your work-
SNM |
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Re: hate and love
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by waos on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 05:47:33 PM AEST
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| yeah, that's cool.. cause lots of times it is like that. the word i think of is "bittersweet", cause it's all sweet to remember it, but when it's not like that anymore it makes you almost bitter. good job writing. |
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Re: hate and love
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by BrandySwanson on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 07:32:39 PM AEST
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very sad emotional poem I can relate well. My opinion love hurts then again love is wonderful. great job.
Brandy |
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Re: hate and love
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by kidpoet_213 on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 12:04:14 PM AEST
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Love and hate... the 2 go hand in hand...
U have expressed the emotion very well here... a very well written piece... keep up the good work and welcome to YPDC
~Donna~
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