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Unsure about the title
Contributed by
TwistedCage
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Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 10:20:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Darkened spirits I feel deep inside of me
Lurking around they are taking me
Bound within these dark twisted walls
Brick by brick they build I fall
The control (Illusion) creating delusion
We all serve something (winning or losing)
Keeping company with tension-anxiety-suspicion
Gotta tear down these walls before fear gets the best of me...
Cage
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TwistedCage
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2004-07-24 22:20:33]
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Re: Unsure about the title
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 10:58:14 PM AEST
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| I've read this piece over and over, I like it. It reminds me of some dark places I've known many years ago. I hope you find some light on lifes journey and peace. Take care. |
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Re: Unsure about the title
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 06:05:59 PM AEST
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if it weren't for your accompanied metaphor of walls and such, a self-title might've given this an agreeable heading..
nevertheless - a fine post.. fantastic darkness endowed.
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Re: Unsure about the title
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by StormyNites on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 04:41:42 AM AEST
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| I am now a devoted fan of yours..you are an extrememly gifted writer |
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