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Tainted Goddess
Contributed by
dizza_13
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Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 11:02:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Why cant you see?
The pain you put in me,
My tainted goddess,
I hope this time you came for me,
I hope this time you set me free.
While youre out there looking for love,
I will be crying out to you,
My tainted goddess,
I try to show but you dont know,
Your love is me but you cant see.
I can feel you all around,
Youre crying out without a sound,
My tainted goddess,
I love you so but you dont know,
Why did you bring me down so low?
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Re: Tainted Goddess
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by Vermillion on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 11:49:12 PM AEST
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very moving and excellently written.well done,keep em coming
~vermillion~ |
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Re: Tainted Goddess
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by corrupted_minds on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 02:19:57 AM AEST
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....beautiful
love loz 4 ev
xoxoxoxo |
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