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I Want To See You DEAD!!!
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 01:27:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I hate you Richard!
I want you dead!
Don't talk to me!
GET OUT OF MY HEAD!!
What put it in you?
To give me sexual abuse?
Do you no how much it's mucked me up?
Living withthis truth!
Have youy any idea,
How much fear your pressance brings?
To look at you.
My own brother.
IT'S DISGUSTING!!!
And then you went and denied it.
To make it look like i've got the broken fuse!
And then you went and got away with it!
You got AWAY WITH "Sexual Abuse"!
... Now don't you dare begin!
Just 'coz some one loves my worth!
Becuase some one respects me!
BECAUSE HE WANTS TO SEAL MY HURT!
Don't you dare start at me,
Saying how Dan must be a slob!
Or some hairy little hobbit!
Why can't you just shut your gob?
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So now you've told me not to worry.
'Coz you won't be a B**STARD for the rest of the trip.
And i just said "you better not be",
Only there's nothing i could do, if you did!
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deathdrop
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2004-07-25 01:27:44]
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Re: I Want To See You DEAD!!!
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by katyqueen35 on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 01:41:22 AM AEST
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wow i think you need to get away from your brother...and report the sexual abuse.and you should go to your parents about this..
he needs to be put away for this..you don't have to put up with this bull****... |
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Re: I Want To See You DEAD!!!
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by ChinaRivera on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 04:01:57 AM AEST
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I liked your poem. The way it rhymed was cool. I love to rhyme myself. ya know. Writing poetry is a good way to get your anger out! I mean, its better than expressing your anger in a physical way. cause two wrongs don't make a right! Right! Im sorry about the sexual abuse you went through. I know personally how angry that can make a person! ( i had to conjure up some deep understanding to actually forgive and forget the whole thing myself ) But anyways, you just gotta get over the pain and conjure up anouf love inside of you and show that you can be the better person and be a bigger man by forgiving your brother
for what he has done! People do things like that to inflict longlasting emotional pain upon a person and to turn them to madness, or to try to deminish self confidence. If this happens, they win! ya know! Sometimes you gotta let go! So when you forgive and forget and be the bigger better person you win! Forgiveness is best in Gods eyes! I agree with him! you? Im sure you do! ;-)
you shouldn't want your brother dead! Instead you should pray for him! cause he might need help or could've been feeling neglected or something to have done what he has done.
Forgive him! don't give in to anger! It only rips at your spirit and tears at your heart. But it is good to express your anger! Which you have done well in writing! Much love and peace 2 u. ;-) -China AkA shorty Jewlz.
May God bless you. |
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Re: I Want To See You DEAD!!!
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by theMoth on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 01:41:01 PM AEST
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| Wow.--the Moth |
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