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not title needed
Contributed by
kandyklown999
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Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 02:49:43 PM in AEST
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I kno u tried,
But people lie,
And now I'm supposed to trust u?
I fell so far,
and almost lost,
But theres always more chances to cave in
and thats all I ever do now days
I break without notice
everythings over soon
I know may days are soon to come..
I'd like to thank you for making me live my life so short.
Copyright ©
kandyklown999
... [
2004-07-25 14:49:43]
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Re: not title needed
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 03:38:02 PM AEST
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wow...it;s a short ands sweet poem (the best kind) it's amazing...so much emotion packed into so few words!
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Re: not title needed
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 10:43:28 PM AEST
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| using short hand in postings makes the poem look rather childish and not put together well from the get-go. the publishing community will always abhor the use of "u" and "cuz". i think its a mistake to look so unprofessional, since it does diminish the quality of the poem. its hard to take a poet seriously with their thoughts and feelings if they use IM language. |
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