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The last letter
Contributed by
Shadow
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Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 03:01:51 PM in AEST
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Marching off for a cause unknown
Ready to face danger un-shown
They throw me a gun and tell me to fight
I swear Ill dream of you at night
Our last night together you held me tight
Till we see dawns first light
My daddy raised his win glass high
And said may their blood stain the sky
Off on a plane I think of you
Ill do my best to make it threw
Im scared just but you cant see
Threw the shield I put around me
If I die and you receive the flag
And I come home in a bag
Fly my flag day and night
Let it be our boys light
My greatest honor will be to die
For my country I hold most high
Never forget what I have said
Always know its for you Ive bled
Copyright ©
Shadow
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2004-07-25 15:01:51]
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Re: The last letter
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by abnormal on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 03:38:13 PM AEST
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very heart felt. i think war sucks but its very nessessary to protect ourselves. yes where gonna lose men and women but its worth it so we dont have another pearl harbor or 9/11. if ya like silly funny poetry please read mine. maybe it will cheer up your day Please leave a comment and read our other poetry
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Re: The last letter
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by Suzume_B on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 06:26:35 PM AEST
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| I know you told me not to read this one shadow, but you should know by now I don't listen. This poem is very moving, (I cried) Don't stop writing. You've such away with words. Bravo! (I'll only fly it for you) |
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Re: The last letter
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by pixie on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 10:30:10 AM AEST
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awww this is very sad Shadow, please dont ever stop writing, your expression is wonderful and you're very talented,
takecare
pixie xx
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Re: The last letter
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 12:15:15 PM AEST
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very moving, beautiful heartfelt tribute, hugs n' love nessa
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