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Abnormal Wars – Space Is Neat-O
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abnormal
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Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 03:33:14 PM in AEST
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In a abnormal glaxy, to far away to comprehend
Hundreds of space thingies called Nuzzy Lumpkins are being pointed at
Seanugget the celetial space prince said that the Nuzzy Lumpkins are innocent and should be left alone untill they are properly recharged
Susanne the not-so-nice galatic bully man wanted to digest the Nuzzy Lumpkins right before he went bronosauraus hunting
All of a sudden, a rip in the galaxys time capsul unbalanced a terrorizing aray of bright colors changing the Nuzzy Lumpkins into vicious pokers
They poked Susanne the not-so-nice Galatic space bully man to death and Tidily winked his clothes off
Then the Nuzzy Lumpkins awarded Seanugget the celestial space prince by giving him a horsey machine that turned on by chanting the secret saying which was Over the shoulder bolder holder
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Re: Abnormal Wars – Space Is Neat-O
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by hooray_its_jen on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 03:41:09 PM AEST
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Quite an interesting poem you've written here. It was fun to read but I'm not sure I understand it. It was fun reading it though. I've said it before and I'll say it again, I'm not down to earth today. I'll read it again when I have my brain back.
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Re: Abnormal Wars – Space Is Neat-O
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by BlazeingHeart on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 05:09:02 PM AEST
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| I don't really get what the poem is about but try to use smaler names to describe the charicters |
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Re: Abnormal Wars – Space Is Neat-O
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by kyletycz on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 05:14:03 PM AEST
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| crazy poo poo right there, but interesting none the less.... |
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Re: Abnormal Wars – Space Is Neat-O
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 11:40:45 PM AEST
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wow! what a trip that was nice to see you back again.
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Re: Abnormal Wars – Space Is Neat-O
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 03:41:51 PM AEST
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You are expanding and enlarging my imagination!!! How great this is! I'm very broad minded so this entices me! Did your mother drop you in the toilet when you were small? Or did you fall from a tree with me?
Whatever, few will appreciate.......but don't you forget.......few is all right.....it's the majority that doesn't rein!!!!
Just because we are few, doesn't mean we aren't right!
I'd hate to be your wife!!just kidding of course!
You are fantastic in my book!
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