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R.I.P.
Contributed by
Chabelita
on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 10:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Tonight
I took you out
Into the graveyard
For lost souls
And laid you in
A grave teen feet deep.
Maybe now you'll stay.
I pluck the petals
Off a red rose
And whisper words you'll never hear
And lay a thorny stem
Across your face.
The thorn cut without blood.
Maybe now you'll stay.
I close the coffin door
And forget that you were ever there.
It's time I let you go,
Time I let you die
And rot in a grave
As you deserve.
I throw ten feet of dirt upon you.
Maybe now you'll stay.
Copyright ©
Chabelita
... [
2002-10-28 10:00:00]
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Re: R.I.P.
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by spaded on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 11:26:13 AM AEST
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I hope now they stay away, and if not, at least over time, it will dull to just an annoying little ache...
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Re: R.I.P.
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 12:54:39 PM AEST
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| Wow this was deep how sad!Christina |
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Re: R.I.P.
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by spaceotter on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 08:50:49 PM AEST
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| Nicely put. :) Very well written. |
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Re: R.I.P.
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 06:17:59 AM AEST
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This is different... deep.. I like it
Good write |
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Re: R.I.P.
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by Knowledge on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 07:04:47 AM AEST
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Talk about deep! (pun) lol. I like this one a lot. Its very touching to me because I can relate. Loving someone and not receiving any love in return is harsh. It shattered me before. But I am glad that I don't feel they need to be punished, because I know that we don't choose who we love.
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Re: R.I.P.
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by OreO on
Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 01:36:18 PM AEST
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This was so deep
Great write, i enjoyed it
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: R.I.P.
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by ravenblack_phoenix on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 12:56:37 AM AEST
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| I hope it stays too, stupid fake love... Rawr! |
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