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DAN OVER-DOSED!
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 05:33:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Silent tears,
Silence the room.
I love you dan!
I really miss you!
You're the only thing,
That keeps me stong!
With out you.
I'd be better off gone.
If you had died!
I wouldn't have known.
you've scarred me inside.
By your thoughts alone.
You're hurting.
And i want to help heal you.
If you had died,
I'd be back on my own.
-OVER-DOSE.
What a dark little word.
-STOMACH PUMPED.
I feel so hurt!!!
I sit here crying,
A thousand miles away from you.
I wish you were beside me.
Then i could never stop hugging you!
-ATTEMPED SUICIDE.
The thing I stopped doing for you!
You promised not to take me for a ride!
And i promised to hang on for you!
You told me that you're sorry.
That you're filled with regret.
You told me not to worry.
Said you'd put it in the past,
Forget...
You said that you love me.
AND LOVE YOU TOO!
But it's not the same any more!
'Coz you've split me back in two.
You wouldn't say what happened.
You said you just broke.
You said there was too much pressure,
And you found you couldn't cope.
So in desperation,
YOU OVER-DOSED!
I can understand your complication.
In your SUICIDAL SPREE.
But YOU MUST understand Dan,
Exactly where you're leaving me!
You're every thing to me!
And i don't want you to die!
You're my hero,
You're the only reason why,
I LIVE MY LIFE!!!!
Copyright ©
deathdrop
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2004-07-26 05:33:57]
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Re: DAN OVER-DOSED!
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by BrandySwanson on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 08:33:00 AM AEST
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this was so sad left me teary eyed. sorry to hear this hope he is ok?
Brandy |
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Re: DAN OVER-DOSED!
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by trustisajoke on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 08:55:32 AM AEST
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Im happy that he didnt die i know how you feel sence my best friend killed himself but overall good poem
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Re: DAN OVER-DOSED!
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by pixie on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 10:08:01 AM AEST
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wow this is a touching write, very emotional and sad..
pixie xx |
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Re: DAN OVER-DOSED!
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 04:23:07 AM AEST
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| sad..but well expressed. venkat |
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