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The Thirst
Contributed by
BlazeingHeart
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Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 09:41:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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The world spins
Eyes won't focus
Life force being drained
Won't let go
Make a struggle
Hands grip and gorce me away and turn me.
Blood flows freely
Throat works, so thirsty
Eyes open, sight sharper
Then I realize
My thirst is quenched
He tells me we will be together forever.
I am an immortal
No one will make me struggle
But I will everyday from now on
Against the thirst
Copyright ©
BlazeingHeart
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2004-07-26 09:41:59]
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Re: The Thirst
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 10:24:40 AM AEST
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interesting poem :D
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Re: The Thirst
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by _Raspberry_ on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 11:34:29 AM AEST
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| I like this one, I would love to see it elaborated upon. |
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Re: The Thirst
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by candysears on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 08:12:55 PM AEST
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Very good write...
God Bless! |
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