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Inside Looking Out
Contributed by
_Raspberry_
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Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 12:08:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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It is a wonderful life
I know, I have it all
To the top I have risen
Tomorrow I will fall
From the outside looking in
You see me up so high
Placed upon a pedestal
So many reasons left to fly
Looking in through that window
Everything you have ever wanted
Be careful what you wish for
I am left feeling haunted
Peering back at you
Through my window tinted black
I show you all I have
And beg you, "Take it back!"
For I know of all I hold
For it, I am grateful
But to feel nothing in spite of these things
For that, I am hateful
I am overflowing (with emptiness)
Despite life, love and prosperity
There is an emptiness inside
That leaves me seeking clarity
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_Raspberry_
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2004-07-26 12:08:58]
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Re: Inside Looking Out
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by trustisajoke on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 12:28:53 PM AEST
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Good poem! keep it up hun
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Re: Inside Looking Out
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 12:40:47 PM AEST
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lovely- well written and insightful.
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Re: Inside Looking Out
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 09:22:20 AM AEST
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another powerful and great write from you *hugs*
pixie xx |
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