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the happy ending
Contributed by
ethdrumsed
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Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 02:06:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
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im so stupid
your so smart
peice of trash
(meets)
work of art
opposites attract
happens every day
the system always wins
theres nothin left to say
the cage of life
we're all held within
you ***** tyrants
you always get to win
theres one point
in living like this
that one point
gets dragged across my wrists
we all will die one day
we all say to near
i say ***** it all
theres nothin left to fear
i knew the end would come
im glad its finaly here
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Re: the happy ending
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 03:24:26 PM AEST
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| i loved this write. excellent piece. |
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Re: the happy ending
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by sid_the_tampon_fairy on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 04:54:41 PM AEST
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Oy. Wow. Awesome write, I esp. like the "theres one point in living like this that one point gets dragged across my wrists" Amazing, amazing. I'm sorry that you feel that way though. I'm here if you need to talk, and I understand what it's like!
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