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Dying Anyway
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 03:33:32 PM in AEST
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Dying Anyway
Your life is pointless
And needs to end
There's no purpose
For you to live
You know the truth
That living is useless
There's no purpose
When you die anyway
No matter
How hard you try
No matter
How many times
You haven't cried
The death sentence
From living
Is torture never ending
Knowing you'll die
Anyway some day
You live to the next day
Wondering why anyway
If life was so precious
Then it wouldn't be taken away
If life was so precious
You would love it more each day
You never loved living
You hated everything about it
As you die to the next day
You're dying anyway
No point in staying
For one more day
Just to fade away
Anyway
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Re: Dying Anyway
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by apollo on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 03:35:42 PM AEST
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do not fade away. life is worth living despite all of its trickery. life has many games, but death has none. the games you win and the games you lose. you must strive to do your best no matter whether you succeed or fail; because failure in the end brings success. i know these thoughts you speak of. do not lose these thoughts, but do not let them consume you.
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Re: Dying Anyway
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 03:37:43 PM AEST
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| Nice write. Ya, we all get 'em, those feelings. It's just a clue we haven't found our 'spot' yet. You enjoy expressing yourself so that seems like it has to be part of the answer. Hugs! |
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Re: Dying Anyway
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by teagy03 on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 06:46:30 PM AEST
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I feel like that a lot of the time, but more intense, please read some of my poems and tell me what you think.
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