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Contributed by
playitforward
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Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 11:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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Feeding life,
My hand was bitten.
Story ending,
halfway written.
No one here,
to stand beside me.
Brave enough,
to help or guide me.
Only windows,
At my side.
all but fire,
burns my pride.
One more breath,
would be my last.
Along with smoke,
I breathe the past.
Pictures,
of the life Ive led,
Family, friends,
and books Ive read.
Precious seconds,
Once were wasting.
changing now,
to tears Im tasting.
Wiping pain,
I see my boy,
Walking,
with his favorite toy.
hard to focus,
Lights are dim,
One last thing,
to say to him.
Tell him not,
to see the lies.
But hear the truth,
and close his eyes.
Inhaling breaks me from my past
I know this breath
will be my last.
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2002-10-28 11:30:00]
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Re: last
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 12:04:53 PM AEST
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| Wow what a very sad & touching write!Nicely done! Christina |
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Re: last
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 03:20:45 PM AEST
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| This brought tears to my eyes .. I am so sorry for your loss. Love the poem. |
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Re: last
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 11:26:56 PM AEST
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| beautifully written! i am so sorry for your loss. |
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Re: last
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by rbp861 on
Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 12:23:49 AM AEST
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| grately written,good job |
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Re: last
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by Lady_Bubbles420 on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 05:22:31 PM AEST
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| Well written write. Very touching. |
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