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the land that they forgot
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 04:30:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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past the old bridge
the rickety old women
stands a stream
clear as crystal
its bottom so deep
yet,when one steps further
you seem to be able to walk on water
after the stream
there is a ever green forest
the trees sway in the light breeze
and lap up the sunshine
the woodland elves seem to sprint through the grass
they whisper excitedly
as you approach 'the land'
you come to an opening
and the elves surround
the seven trees in the middle seperate
and there is a knobely door
you take the key out
and twist in inside the door handle
it clicks
and the door swings open
the elves gasp
the light shines out
and from inside the door
a whole world is visible
the green lucious hills roam free
making the land look so beautiful
the bushes shine ever so bright,not green purple
the streams rush
and the smell is mint
fresh and clean
the birds sing sweetly
and the flowers never die
there is no people here
except:elves,pixies,nymphs,giants,little people,water fairys,good witches,knomes,wizards,mermaids,unicorns
and other magical folk,found deep in 'the land'
the elves applase as you step inside
and the door closes
you look back
and the door has vanished
you dont care though
your here!
you run over to your favourite bench
and all your memories come flooding back
your childhood rushes in your mind
and you smile
and you remember your first glimps of the world
was of a beautiful women
it wasnt your mother though
like an angel
but she slowly disappears
and you cry you want her back
but you are lifted into warm arms
and you forget her instantly
as your swinging on the ropes of time
you remember your old den
your water fights with the mermaids
and your first crush was on hamforthe the merman
you laugh and smile
your in utter bliss
heaven nearly
but you know you cant stay forever
and you bid goodbye to your old time friends
you walk back to the highest mountain
and he politely bids you goodbye
you kiss the beautiful green grass
and the whole land blushes
you smile
and you take out the key
the door appears
and you open it
it clicks
and you step through
the door disappears
and your standing in a forest clearing
trees surrounding this odd strench of land
you blink
puzzled
why am i here?
ive forgotton...
you turn and walk away
for the last time
you bid
'the land they forgot.....an eternal farewell....'
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Hannah_Heaven
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2004-07-26 16:30:46]
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Re: the land that they forgot
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by buccaneer on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 05:10:18 PM AEST
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PLEASE IF THERE IS AN AWARD TO BE GIVING I WILL NOMINATE U GET IT ALL FOR THIS IS TRUELY LOVELY.
IT'S BEYOND MY IMAGINATION
YOU REALLY GOT THE WORDS. |
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