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Dont tell me you'll love me til the end of forever
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
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Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 05:15:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You may tell me,
You can pull down the stars
Conquer the moon, kiss the sun for me
But don't tell me
That you'd love me 'til the end of forever
For it's just like lovely roses that forbid my touch.
You may tell me,
You can reap an apple from a mango tree
Or grow strawberries on hot summer days
But don't tell me,
You'd love me 'til the end of forever
For it's just like my sweet dreams, mine when I'm asleep.
You may tell me,
We could walk along the clouds
Fly higher than the birds to play
But don't tell me,
That you'd love me 'til the end of forever,
For it's just like the wind I so much longed to hold.
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Re: Dont tell me you'll love me til the end of forever
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by badboyzlover on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 05:22:41 PM AEST
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| I love this poem soo much. You must really like whoever it is your talking about because you dont want to lose them.It is soo good plz keep writing. |
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Re: Dont tell me you'll love me til the end of forever
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by brew on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 08:21:21 PM AEST
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| Very differ...............deep! In need of the one that has captured you, or the feelings.! |
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Re: Dont tell me you'll love me til the end of forever
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 08:30:05 PM AEST
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Very refreshing poem. Good rhyme scheme, and I love the way you expressed your dissapproval of that love. I look forward to reading more of your poetry.
Kimberly |
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Re: Dont tell me you'll love me til the end of forever
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 09:03:02 AM AEST
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wonderful write....
pixie xx |
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