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The winds of time!
Contributed by
shepdog1972
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Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 01:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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The winds of time blow hard today yet the dreams of tommorow still lay ahead anothere day same ol way another dream gone again. The winds of time blow hard today the breeze wonders galently. Drifting on like a a long lost sole the candles lit tonight wont dim to low. The winds of tome blow hard and free the way a lost sole must look and see to feel alone it cries and weeps wiser it gets to all regrets. The winds of time blew hard today!
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Re: The winds of time!
(User Rating: 1 ) by OreO on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 01:46:08 PM AEST (User
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This is a great write
You put your words together
beautifully, i like the line where
you wrote "another day same ol
way another dream gone again."
Keep em' coming.
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: The winds of time!
(User Rating: 1 ) by femme_fatale on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 09:42:19 AM AEST (User
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this is a great read your words flow beautifully into each other....keep 'em coming |
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Re: The winds of time!
(User Rating: 1 ) by ShadowsCloud on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 05:26:18 PM AEST (User
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This is truely beautiful.
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Re: The winds of time!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 06:56:36 AM AEST (User
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Truly a beautiful and inspirational write!!
(It could use a spell check, tho..)
Jenni |
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