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say it true
Contributed by
kammie
on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 01:01:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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all the things you do
like say your true
but how can you be
you say you like me
but we cant get together
like ever
i have feelings for you you know
so why leave me hanging so
hanging on a thread
my heart now dead
all i ever do is think
we'd be great together we link
another link in loves chain
another link the chain would gain
so heres a question from me to you
do you love me? say you do
but in your heart say it true
Copyright ©
kammie
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2004-07-27 13:01:00]
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Re: say it true
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 01:39:44 PM AEST
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I like this, the style brings the poem around to a circle and I love the way you ended it. I can feel your frustration and your heart coming through.
Great job! |
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Re: say it true
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by shanarah on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 02:08:25 AM AEST
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| I like this style, You did a good job, you can feel the anxiety level you must be feeling.. |
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