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What do you see?
Contributed by
teagy03
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Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 07:05:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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What do you see when you look at me?
a girl with immortality,
a simple girl with mixed up plans,
a girl who hurts her family.
Why do you laugh when you walk on by?
Is it cause you see me cry?
Do I make you mad as hell?
Cause if I do, I dont really try.
Why do I write poetry?
To make my mind a little free,
To set my mind more at ease,
My eyes they cry, I cannot see.
Why and where, how and who?
Whats a girl supposed to do?
How can I just change my life?
And do what I feel is good and true?
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teagy03
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2004-07-27 19:05:11]
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Re: What do you see?
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 08:13:20 PM AEST
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i see someone who cares too much about what others want and what others think. =]
great write. the best intentions can sometimes have the worst outcomes. |
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Re: What do you see?
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 12:03:34 AM AEST
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I know how you feel exactly. And I am sure there are others who feel the same way> You have talent and keep the poems coming!
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