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They Didn't See
Contributed by
pyrofairyburning
on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 07:21:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I'm so sorry mother.
I never could have imagined,
what it would be like,
to lose your duaghter.
I didn't think of you,
when I was alone in my room.
All I knew was I was the storm again.
I couldn't breathe, I couldn't think.
I could only see,
the razor conveniently in front of me.
I'm so sorry father.
I stole your little girl.
She was so innocent, so precious.
Still, you should have known.
You introduced her to a life long mate.
Pain. You all did.
You should've seen.
I showed every one.
With scars and tears and rage.
You were not looking at what you saw.
You understand now, don't you?
When you look down at my marble stone,
knowing that's all that's left of your baby.
Remember seeing you duaghter,
bloody again.
For the last time.
It didn't go away mommy,
the hurt was still there.
You promised me it would leave.
Even so, it wouldn't be fair.
You wasted you time, daddy,
it happened any way.
Now, I'm just not there.
Copyright ©
pyrofairyburning
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2004-07-27 19:21:33]
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Re: They Didn't See
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by badboyzlover on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 07:27:16 PM AEST
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Wow, this is a really great poem
Plz keep writing your a good writer |
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Re: They Didn't See
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by brew on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 07:30:00 PM AEST
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| Sadness..but good write.......Keep the heart and one will see |
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Re: They Didn't See
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 08:10:26 PM AEST
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| great write. |
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Re: They Didn't See
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 05:56:36 AM AEST
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wonderful write, very sad and deep,
pixie xx |
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Re: They Didn't See
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by CrimsonTears on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 04:51:10 PM AEST
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sad...but great write...i can relate to this....good job
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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