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Admitting Defeat
Contributed by
srsuckow
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Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 12:23:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Ive admitted defeat
And Ill try to move on
Ive wracked my brain
For what Ive done wrong
Youve chosen another girl
I still dont know why
I thought we were right
Of one soul, one heart, one mind
Its not very often
That Ill let someone in
Unwilling to love
My heart had always been
You made me break my own rules
And youve made me insane
Who knew the heartless wonder
Could feel this much pain
Ill meet someone else
But to my heart I wont be true
Because I know that for me
It will always be you
Copyright ©
srsuckow
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2004-07-28 00:23:50]
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Re: Admitting Defeat
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by 61grahamj on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 03:06:03 AM AEST
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you have expressed with great feeling one of lifes bitter lessons but as you have said life must go on. great poem
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Re: Admitting Defeat
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by jenny21614 on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 03:40:41 PM AEST
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I love this poem. Every single person on this earth can understand the pain you felt at that moment in your life. Hopefully you've moved on by now:) don't worry, everything happens for a reason, and even though it might have felt right at the time, it obviously wasn't, and that can only mean you have bigger and better things waiting for you!
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Re: Admitting Defeat
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by CrimsonTears on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 04:46:54 PM AEST
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I know how you feel....i know how badly it sux to feel this way....this is an excellent poem tho....great work
Lots of Love
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