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Sorry, I am so sorry my love.......
Contributed by
ravisada
on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 07:27:19 AM in AEST
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ApologyPoetry
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Sorry, I am so sorry my love
I hurt you without any reason
Your tears made my heart cry
Why I did to you that I don't know
Forgive me ! I am so sorry my love
Sorry, I am so sorry my love
I scold you without any reason
Your pain made my heart to think
My cruel heart suspects you for nothing
Forgive me! I am so sorry my love
Sorry, I am so sorry my love
I did not mean to hurt you
When you cry then I cry more than you
Because I love you all my heart and soul
Forgive me! I am so sorry my love
Sorry, I am so sorry my love
I told you that I would never hurt you again
but again I made your tears flow once more
Now, I promise you that I will not hurt you again
Forgive me! I am so sorry my love.
Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
Copyright @2004 Ravi Sathasivam
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ravisada
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2004-07-28 07:27:19]
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Re: Sorry, I am so sorry my love.......
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by AspenGlow on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 10:21:38 AM AEST
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Ah so many sorries are like so many tomorrows...they seem to repeat.
I liked this much, thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Sorry, I am so sorry my love.......
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 04:39:40 AM AEST
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Ravi, this is spectacularly beautiful.
I absolutely adore the flow, and the use of repetition is quite good actually.
Strong, resonating piece...
Keep writing. |
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Re: Sorry, I am so sorry my love.......
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 05:05:53 AM AEST
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An open house on jealousy and regret.
Like aspenglow's assertion - too many tomorrows; so many more sorrows.
Interesting read, Ravisada.
Keep writing. |
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