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my love
Contributed by
rie
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Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 08:07:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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TRUE LOVE
to be taken, to be taken,So glad it is you,
my heart is open, to you and only you,
to express my love, MY true feelings for you,
my deep, deep feelings are for you, yes only you,
my soul has been hidden from view until you,
my love, my true love, i truly love you,
you have opened my heart to a view that is new,
i fear this, i run, afraid of the view,
fearful of seeing, of truth, of feeling you.
my feelings for you ,true love, so open to view.
this man of emotion, lightness, giving of view so open, so giving, so open to view. so true oh so true. together our love so open so true.
good god how i love you forever true blue. how i love you.
Copyright ©
rie
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2004-07-28 08:07:15]
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Re: my love
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 08:29:09 AM AEST
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Tricky little poem. I like the flow of it. And it's smartly rhymed.
Kimberly :) |
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Re: my love
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 10:21:23 AM AEST
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Great to see you posting again, Rie...Hope all is better for you now. Missed chatting with you. Hope MM gave you my message...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: my love
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by Drapes on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 04:49:41 PM AEST
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How sweet! Nice job!
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