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Differently
Contributed by
emeraldeyes
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Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 09:23:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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If I could do things differently
I'd love myself more and the world a little less
I'd pay attention to what matters
and I'd see that you and I are best
If I could push rewind
I'd want the things that matter most
I'd kiss your smile, feel your skin
and I'd realize all other promises are only hoax
If I could just replay our lives
I'd love you so much more
But, I didn't and it's over
I can't go back there anymore
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emeraldeyes
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2004-07-28 09:23:29]
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Re: Differently
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by Solnubis on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 09:33:25 AM AEST
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Could relate a lot to this poem. I lost someone and I tried to get him back, but he did not want to deal with it. Maybe it just wasn't meant to be.
Your thoughts were beautifully written. |
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Re: Differently
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 10:32:59 PM AEST
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| excellent post. i loved the emotion in this. this had enough creative edge to separate it from the other posts. |
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