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Let Me In
Contributed by
emeraldeyes
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Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 09:28:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Can I have you- forever- happily ever after
Will you let me drown your pain with laughter
Will you be mine, always, to have and to hold
Will you give me your heart, to tenderly mold
Can you let me help you understand
That I love the beast and I love the man
I want you, one hundred percent, as you are
You want peace? no need to look that far
I am here, and here is where I'll stay
Either here or there- I'm yours, starting today
Let down your gaurd and let me in
I can show you where your life begins
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emeraldeyes
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2004-07-28 09:28:59]
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Re: Let Me In
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by Psyche on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 09:50:12 AM AEST
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OOooooo..yeah. Sometimes men have such a silly wall up around them, that they don't know/trust what's right in front of them! Your proposition is most honorable, and I hope the subject of your poem gives you the same commitment in return! If so, he be a rare man indeed and worthy of that love!
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Re: Let Me In
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by SweetRhythm on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 10:18:45 AM AEST
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Awh lovely hearting warming poem, beautifully writen & so sweet. Very good job. Enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing.
Corinna |
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Re: Let Me In
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 10:55:00 AM AEST
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awwwww such a lovely poem,
pixie xx |
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