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Aperture
Contributed by
Sagacious
on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 10:26:02 AM in AEST
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Duplicitous kindness kills us
from behind the pleated
curtains we hang, where
sunlight strikes the
outside, rounded folds,
and shadows fill the
spaces in between--
Taking their shape by virtue
of perspective, as well
as other factors--of ambience,
and aperture (the only
light is the light we
let inside)--and we are
all caricatures, in pleated
Abstraction, waiting for
the sun, and seeking not
to rise--as the occasion
calls for diffusion, through
the layers of our textured
selves, drawn closed by
circumstance, which
duplicitous kindness brings.
Copyright ©
Sagacious
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2004-07-28 10:26:02]
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Re: Aperture
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by jenny21614 on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 12:21:12 PM AEST
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| wow. real good. |
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Re: Aperture
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 12:45:14 PM AEST
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Duplicitous kindness kills us
from behind the pleated
curtains we hang, where
sunlight strikes the
outside, rounded folds,
and shadows fill the
spaces in between--
How true!! - and yet I would never have been able to come up with this comparison. Very original thinking. I liked this. |
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Re: Aperture
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 02:23:55 PM AEST
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| Duplicity on serves to create a larger web of deceit in the end. Nicely written, good structure. |
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Re: Aperture
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:46:10 PM AEST
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excellent write, so true, great style and flow too:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Aperture
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by FleurdeSang on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 10:16:50 AM AEST
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I can not comment with many words as I usually do, because you have left me with no words to describe how beautiful this is... All i can say is two words: True Perfection.
All my love, your dearest friend and fan,
*~Fleur~* |
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