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My fear as i wait to die
Contributed by
trustisajoke
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Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 02:11:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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It is not my time
but now i must die
this worldes so wrong
i can not help but cry
it shouldnt be the end
atleast not for me
what i did was so wrong
me and you both see
im scared and lonely
at my last hours
i wish this was a dream
but i can not help but scream
please dont kill me
im to young to die
i remember all the memories
well im blinded by my tears
i wish you were here to chase away my fears
im so afraid and so distressed
as i sit and wait to die
why must this be the end
i dont understand why
as i sit and wait upon my fate
i think about your love
please understand this is the end
i wish i had another chance
this life was wrong for me
-T.S-
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2004-07-28 14:11:59]
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Re: My fear as i wait to die
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 10:59:08 PM AEST
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| A very touching write! Christina |
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Re: My fear as i wait to die
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by Rain on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 04:44:01 PM AEST
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dont take this as mean but it would flow much better if you didnt use "I" so much and also if you didnt seem as if you wanted some one to pitty you but more to understand you.
just a thought. |
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