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Suicidal Actions
Contributed by
cheech
on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 02:19:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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a blow to my head
i'm laying in my bed
no one here
no one there
does anyone care
can anyone hear me
its not fare
i don't know where to be
suicidal actions
too many coffins
to choose from
i need a bomb
a knife in the stomach
no one knows it but i'm stuck
i feel like a ***** and chuck
i'm living in a shack
a few cuts on my wrists
i have no prince
my life is a rince
a lot of cuts on my wrists
suicidal actions
i have no affections
i have no reactions
suicidal actions
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cheech
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2004-07-28 14:19:18]
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Re: Suicidal Actions
(User Rating: 1 )
by savedbydeath on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 02:43:44 PM AEST
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i really like this one,with few words used u created something with alot of emotion and sadness,i know where ur coming from,i'm there with u!!!
savedbydeath
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Re: Suicidal Actions
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by theMoth on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 02:47:43 PM AEST
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| Nice work, Cheech. .. Say...Is Dave there?--Mothy |
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Re: Suicidal Actions
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by CrimsonTears on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 03:59:58 PM AEST
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I know what u feel like...u expressed it well...good job
Lots of Love
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