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Life's a Gamble
Contributed by
ChristopherFriedrich
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Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 06:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Body full of holes
Punctured by a six inch blade
After a night of partying
Confronted by a man of hate
"Give me all your money"
The fact that you had been gambling didn't bode well
No money to fulfill the man's request
Left you lying in a pool of your own blood
Couple dollars saved could have spared your life
But you spent it all on your so-called "little" problem
Little turns to big all too often
Which was the case on this faithless night
At least you don't have a gambling problem, anymore
Right?
Copyright ©
ChristopherFriedrich
... [
2002-10-29 06:20:00]
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Re: Life's a Gamble
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by Daniel on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 06:22:57 AM AEST
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| quite a twist to what i've known about being mugged and other little things that kill... good write thou. kudos! ;0) -daniel |
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Re: Life's a Gamble
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 07:02:12 AM AEST
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I don't know what it's like to be
mugged or robbed so for that i am
thankful for. Good write
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Life's a Gamble
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by amos on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 09:13:40 AM AEST
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| I always thought black jack was addictive |
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