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For Our Love
Contributed by
Amitron
on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 03:43:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Walking through life
At a slow and steady pace.
May be a secure way,
But it is not my place.
For content you must take action,
Or life shall slip away
If you do not take a chance
Short, will be your days.
Happiness is sometimes known,
Right from the start.
But sometimes it takes a while
To get to some ones heart.
Four basic qualities
For relationships that are a must,
Are happiness, honesty, love,
And trust.
Happiness is laughter,
With smiles everyday!
Honesty is openness,
No lies to mi bebe!
Love is caring
Which for you I always will.
And trust is knowing Im the one for you.
All of these we both have,
And they continue to grow.
Closer and closer and closer we get.
And that lets me know!
I love you more than life
More than anything in this world.
Me, your baby boy, and you
Youre my baby girl.
I know that I will be with you,
Until the end of time.
You know for sure that I am yours,
And you are surely mine.
Slow down now,
And listen close,
This is the part that means the most.
Whenever I look into your eyes,
I see the ones of my future wife.
I see the love we will both share.
I see the one who will always care.
I see the love that was meant to be.
I see the one for me.
I want you to answer Honestly,
Are you Happy with me?
I Trust you to choose the right answer,
Do you Love me?
With all these thoughts and feelings
Swarming through your brain.
Answer me this one last question,
But please do no in vain.
With all of my Love, and Happiness,
I Trust you to answer this Honestly,
Sandra Edith Vargas,
Will You Marry Me?
Copyright ©
Amitron
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2004-07-28 15:43:10]
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Re: For Our Love
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by co_cane13 on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 03:56:26 PM AEST
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| awesome poem and i didnt see the end coming, let us know if she said yes. i bet she will love you for it. |
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Re: For Our Love
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 04:10:18 PM AEST
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Awwww this is awesome!! How can she not say yes when she reads this!!
Welcome to YPDC family.... Good to have you and your love poetry aboard.... best of luck..
Jenni |
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Re: For Our Love
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by jmt25607 on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 10:30:45 PM AEST
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that is so sweet i think she will love it and if she loves you as much as you do her i am sure she will say YES! and i hope she dose so best of luck and i hope you two are happy together for ever keep up the writeing
~jess |
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Re: For Our Love
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by Amitron on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 10:37:21 PM AEST
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Hey, its me, just wanted to tell you guys,
SHE SAID YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 |
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