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Desperate Searchers
Contributed by
Alina
on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 04:20:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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She's desperately searching
For a place of her own
She's desperately searching
For a place to call home
She's desperately searching
For the love of her life
She's despeartely searching
For a place to get high !
He lies on the streets
All worn out and torn
He lies on the streets
He cries and he mourns
And he desperately searches
For the love of his life
He desperately searches for a place to get high!
And as their search continues
Togther they find....
A place of their own
A place for their mind
And as they found the "love" of their life
They finally found a place to get high!!
Copyright ©
Alina
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2004-07-28 16:20:27]
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Re: Desperate Searchers
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by steven_fenton1982 on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 04:24:07 PM AEST
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| not bad :) but afterall only words, words are not impressive when you're tongue tied and they are stuck in you're heart. Anyway i'm a drunk person, who know's ***** about poetry |
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Re: Desperate Searchers
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by steven_fenton1982 on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 04:24:07 PM AEST
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| not bad :) but afterall only words, words are not impressive when you're tongue tied and they are stuck in you're heart. Anyway i'm a drunk person, who know's ***** about poetry |
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Re: Desperate Searchers
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by BrandySwanson on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 05:30:24 PM AEST
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so sad you've written it well.
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Re: Desperate Searchers
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by Sinned on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 12:55:13 PM AEST
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Alina
Despertly searching to me sounds like someone running away from something--Authority parents school or what I don't know,but many of our young people are drawn to drugs & night life drinking and whatnot.Eventually they find the answer isn't in that and kill themselves or grow from the experience.
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