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Darkness
Contributed by
stubbo87
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Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 04:34:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Its almost gone
But its not yet a tragedy
Just wait awhile
And then you will see
The tragedy comes at dawn
Weve had a nice long run
But the end is soon
Enjoy the time
Cause its almost done
Its almost gone
Just wait and see
The tragedy comes at dawn
I liked the black
The gray was nice
But with whats coming next
I dont like this track
Its almost gone
Just wait and see
The tragedy comes at dawn
I wish it didnt happen
I wish it could all stop
You see a boy before you
But soon youll see the men
Its almost gone
Just wait and see
The tragedy comes at dawn
Soon I will see your face
But I dont need to know that
I only need to know
The feeling of your embrace
Its almost gone
Just wait and see
The tragedy comes at dawn
So I find myself petrified
When it gets here-
Will you be gone?
I dont want to be denied
Its almost gone
Just wait and see
The tragedy comes at dawn
I dont want you to leave me
But you have no obligations
I guess when it comes
From me you will be free
Its almost here
But I dont understand
Why nature must always interfere
Copyright ©
stubbo87
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2004-07-28 16:34:28]
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Re: Darkness
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 04:42:59 PM AEST
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It seems to me to be the loss of a child's need and dependency on you as Nature intervenes and allows them to grow. The empty nest syndrome, perhaps?
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Re: Darkness
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by noone on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 01:23:29 PM AEST
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This is a great poem. You have expressed your feelings brilliantly! You have talent, keep writing,
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