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Forever Love
Contributed by
blueeyes
on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 07:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I am but an island,
surrounded by the sea,
without you there is no me,
a thousand wrongs I"d surely wright,
to once again hold you tight,
I"ll never replace you with another,
I"m the book,your the cover,
and I prey again one day I"ll be your lover.
Copyright ©
blueeyes
... [
2002-10-29 07:20:00]
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Re: Forever Love
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by Shanzi on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 08:06:29 AM AEST
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| I like the way this is written. Normally I hate rhyme but it works really well in this piece. Good job. |
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Re: Forever Love
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 08:24:51 AM AEST
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| This was really a good poem even though it was short it was too the point! Christina |
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Re: Forever Love
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by GEQUETSCHT on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 10:56:20 AM AEST
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that is soo sweet, and such a cute little poem, whoever writen to they must be very dear
Ali |
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Re: Forever Love
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by nay on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 08:03:48 AM AEST
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| It's short, but it explains alot |
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