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Scars from Feeling
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:45:09 PM in AEST
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Scars from Feeling
You're just another cutter
Your life doesn't matter
Because it's in tatters
To you only yourself matters
To Hell with everyone else
You only care about yourself
You're slashing your skin
Like it will help you in the end
That when the skin mends
It will heal you within
Like you never thought that sin
To kill yourself in the end
While everyone knows you did
Everything doesn't dissappear
When another feeling appears
That one glance will bring you to tears
Because you'll never feel it again
The feeling of wanting to live
Because you feel nothing within
Your worst fears in red
While you cut and bled
Your skin will never mend
Your life is always at an end
Because of what you feel within
Always killing you till you mend
The reasons you don't want to live
That day you'll never see
You died before you could be
Someone without the need
To cut and bleed
You'll never see the end
You prayed to be Heaven sent
The scars never did mend
What you were feeling within
The scars from feeling
Killed you in the end
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Re: Scars from Feeling
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:58:57 PM AEST
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five stars 4 u
You've mapped out the feelings well here. I see much of this in poetry on this site and it breaks my heart 2 know that someone feels this way etc.
Your write is direct to the point, shocking and very powerfull!
i feel that your bluntness here will get to a few and they will wake up and grab life by its horns and at lest try.
Good job with this over powerfull sad, subject.
Huggs, luv,
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Re: Scars from Feeling
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 12:02:47 AM AEST
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very sad, beautifully expressed....... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Scars from Feeling
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by katyqueen35 on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 01:05:51 AM AEST
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You express this poem so well...
Such emotions........... |
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Re: Scars from Feeling
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by nexxa on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 01:37:04 AM AEST
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Wow you were not kidding wee one
very controversial poem here and the fact that you can write for and against the same subject is so powerful you are a poet of great magnitude rhyme's and all its perfect
Nexxa
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Re: Scars from Feeling
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by pixie on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 06:33:13 AM AEST
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amazingly expressed , you have hit the nail on the head with this....
pixie xx |
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Re: Scars from Feeling
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 10:01:10 AM AEST
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| Seriously heart breaking, so much agony, so vivid, beautifully written. |
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