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My God
Contributed by
Jennette_The_poet
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Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 12:22:56 AM in AEST
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My God, My Father,
You are all my power
through Jesus Christ and you Lord you two are my saviors.
My breath comes from you.
My heart beats is something you gave to me.
You keep my loved ones and I from all the harm.
You listen to all of my prayers.
You answer them as best as you can.
God, I understand your will being.
God, I accept you as you are.
God, I live your way and do the dues that I am might to do.
through the acceptance of your most loving Son, Jesus.
With this prayer, my act of faith,
I ask for to protection the ones I love so dearly and they are
John and my loving little girl Susan, Please let them
feel this special gift of peace and let feel you're loving touch.
In all of my efforts I writing this for you,
May you accept this gracefully and know it comes from the heart?
In all that I say and do,
May Your glory shine through me?
And may it always be with me until the end?
As I end this prayer to you and your loving son
I just want you to know your the Almighty, My God, My Father,
And the holy sprit now I end this right here and now
Amen.
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Re: My God
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by katyqueen35 on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 01:08:35 AM AEST
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Re: My God
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by Jennette_The_Poet on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 02:02:32 AM AEST
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REDUE ON THE POEM PLEASE PEOPLE SEE THIS I HAD SOME TYPO'S
My God, My Father,
You are all my power
through Jesus Christ and you Lord you two are my saviors.
My breath comes from you.
My heart beats is something you gave to me.
You keep my loved ones and I from all the harm.
You listen to all of my prayers.
You answer them as best as you can.
God, I understand your well being.
God, I accept you as you are.
God, I live your way and do the dues that I am to do.
through the acceptance of your most loving Son, Jesus.
With this prayer, my act of faith,
I ask for you to protection the ones I love so dearly and they are
John and my loving little girl Susan, Please let them
feel this special gift of peace and let feel you're loving touch.
In all of my efforts I writing this for you,
May you accept this gracefully and know it comes from the heart?
In all that I say and do,
May Your glory shine through me?
And may it always be with me until the end?
As I end this prayer to you and your loving son
I just want you to know your the Almighty, My God, My Father,
And the holy sprit now I end this right here and now
Amen.
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Re: My God
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by emystar on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 03:11:07 AM AEST
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The prayer of a righteous person availeth much.
Aa veery fervent prayer from the heart.
I'm sure God will honer this awesome write.
hugs, smiles,
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Re: My God
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by Tanmaya on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 04:27:12 AM AEST
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Such a sweet and heartfelt prayer...
God bless you. |
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Re: My God
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by Stoney1 on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 08:26:29 AM AEST
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This is a very nice prayer, but as with most pieces of writng;
it could stand another edit.
Since you asked for comments, I've passed the red pen over
it and tightened it up. I've re-written a couple of sentences in
an effort to repair the syntax without changing the voice which
is uniquely yours.
My God, {m}{-M}y Father,
You are {-all} my power
through Jesus Christ and {-you} {+the} Lord {+Father}
{-you}{+who} {-two} are my saviors
My breath comes from you
My heart beat{-}s {-is something} you gave {-to} me
You keep my loved ones
and I from all the harm
You listen to all of my prayers
{+And} {+y}{-Y}ou answer them as best as you can
God, I understand your {-well} {+B}{-b}eing
God, I accept you as you are
God, I live {+according to Your laws}{-your way and do the dues that I am to do.}
through {-the} acceptance of your most loving Son, Jesus
With this prayer, my act of faith,
I ask for you{+r} {-to} protection {+of my}{-the ones I} love{+d} {-so dearly and they are}
John and {-my loving little girl} Susan,
Please let them feel this special gift of peace
{+Through}{-and let feel} {+Y}{-y}ou{+r}{-'re} loving touch
{-In all of my efforts} I writ{+e}{-ing} this {-for you,}
Knowing that You accept that it is from my heart
{-May you accept this gracefully and know it comes from the heart?}
In all that I say and do,
May Your glory shine through me,{-?}
And may it always be with me until the end{-?} Amen
This is where it should actually end.
{-As I end this prayer to you and your loving son}
{-I just want you to know your the Almighty, My God, My Father,
And the holy sprit now I end this right here and now }
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Edit marks removed:
My God, my Father,
You are my power
through Jesus Christ
and the Lord, Your Father,
who are my saviors,
My breath comes from you
My heart beat you gave me
You keep my loved ones
and I from all harm
You listen to all my prayers
And You answer them
as best as You can
God, I understand Your Being
God, I accept You as You are
God, I live according to Your laws
through acceptance
of Your most loving Son, Jesus
With this prayer, my act of faith,
I ask for Your protection
of my beloved John and Susan,
Please let them feel
this special gift of peace
Through Your loving touch
I write this knowing that
You accept that
it is from my heart,
In all that I say and do,
May Your glory shine through me
And may it always be with me
until the end
Amen
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Re: My God
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by ChinaRivera on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 05:35:48 AM AEST
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That was nice jennette. ;-) I Love it when people talk to the Lord in such a Lovely way as you did. May God Bless You. Peace & Love -China Rivera
jennette, i wrote a poem titled "My Dear Lord" It's a poetical prayer also. Go to my pages and read it. I think you'll love it.
Nice poem! ;-)
May God Bless You! |
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