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My Puter
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 06:54:52 AM in AEST
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Your mouse the only one I want
Inside my house as the others romp
Your hard drive is so very dear to me
Better than an ocean cruise of the seas
Blackouts during storms make you silent
I sit staring at your monitor and repent
Midnights to the bathroom tripping over a dog
Return to bed ? Ha! Online we must log!
Sometimes I long to hear your little 'ping'
Only you can do this for me it is like you sing
In my darkest hours of breaking loneliness
We can go online together; utter happiness
Throughout the Ages we travel in time
Your my best friend O' puter of mine
Sad opperations when you had to go away
Me waiting 4-U with open arms in the driveway
Donations to our brilliant tech well spent
This man who U+me know the Angels sent
Then it happened, I know you felt it too, You
lit up in that magic moment and again time flew
I think I am madly in love with my puter
And it must be a guy 'cause otherwise I'd
Shoot her.
Copyright ladyfawn 2001
Copyright ©
ladyfawn
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Re: My Puter
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by Chrissie on
Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 07:11:23 AM AEST
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Dearest Nessa,
You've made my day!! I know just how you feel....I'm still giggling at this wonderful poem.
So glad to read your work again.
Much love
Chrissie xx |
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Re: My Puter
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by S_K_Williamson on
Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 07:24:53 AM AEST
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Nessa,
I was so glad to see you posted. I have had a tad of a time getting to post this but I will keep working on it until I get it right...lol
You write wonderfuly...I can relate to this one...big time.
Great write my friend,
Sharon;) |
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Re: My Puter
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by ginsdance on
Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 04:16:05 PM AEST
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Oh it's great!!! I always loved your poetry!!! This one is as cute as My Darling Wolverine that you had on the old site. {My mom loved that one too} I'm so glad to be reading other people's poetry on this site again! I've missed it!!! Thanks for the terrific poem! *hugs*
Gin |
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Re: My Puter
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by chatabox on
Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 06:29:36 PM AEST
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I wouldn't put myself online for anyone but you and all the other million onliners.....hehehe
Lol, I know what you mean, my offline friends thought I had hibernated once. I limit myself now, as I am torn between my pc and clothes shopping......a difficult choice.
Great poem. |
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Re: My Puter
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by Kassidi on
Saturday, 13th July 2002 @ 04:31:15 PM AEST
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Ladyfawn, (Or should I say Nessa)
This was another lovely poem, and like everybody else I can relate to this. WONDERFUL write! :D
Kassidi |
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Re: My Puter
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by wordsy on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 10:20:54 AM AEST
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LOL, Truely wonderful. You have captured the feelings we all here must feel.
wordsy. |
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Re: My Puter
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by Bizzy on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 02:15:03 AM AEST
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Dear Ladyfawn, I enjoyed this poem so much!
So cute and humorous and true, too! Bbizzy
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Re: My Puter
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by darbysue59 on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 01:43:03 PM AEST
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| cute i loved this,and it made me laugh,can i borrow your gun |
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Re: My Puter
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by Cynthia on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 08:34:53 PM AEST
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| Oh Nessa, my sweet friend, I loved this. I thought it was extremely cute. *S* Cynthia |
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