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silent is the sound
Contributed by
socialmisfit
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Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 01:33:36 AM in AEST
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There is a silence where hath been no sound,
In the cold grave deep beneath the ground
a single desecration were the life beat has gone still
which has been muted, and now sleeps profound
no life beats withing this ground, no hushed voice to be found
that never spoke over the idle sound
but outside these desolute walls
Of antique palaces, where Man hath been,
silence no more, peace has fled
seek not the echo, for in this place alone
There the true Silence is, self-conscious and alone.
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Re: silent is the sound
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by nexxa on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 02:26:46 AM AEST
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"There the true Silence is, self-conscious and alone."
Wonderful line pulls the whole thing together never was a truer statement I like it very much I was a little thrown off at first with the topic then found the depth in it and wow I am surprised I love it when that happens lol
Thank you for your words.
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Re: silent is the sound
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 08:09:14 AM AEST
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Very intruiging write. And I like the shakespear twing to it.
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