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When simple words are hard to find
Contributed by
Tanmaya
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Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 04:22:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Simple words are hard to find,
and even harder to speak.
I have gone around in circles
just trying to tell you what I mean.
Sometimes I try to speak my heart out,
and then wonder what you exactly heard,
how do I know what you know, its so confusing.
But, love is such a simple word.
So, come take my hand and smile into my eyes,
lets take a long, long walk into a dream.
I know the sound of your steps will fall in place,
with the rhythm of my heartbeat.
Well laugh together on the roads of tomorrow,
leaving a golden trail of memories behind.
Come, take my hand and smile into my eyes,
whenever simple words are hard to find.
Copyright ©
Tanmaya
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2004-07-29 04:22:08]
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Re: When simple words are hard to find
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by emystar on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 04:34:39 AM AEST
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Heavenly beautifull masterpeice of understanding.
great write.
huggs, luv,
emy |
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Re: When simple words are hard to find
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by venkat on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 04:34:52 AM AEST
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| very delightful..venkat |
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Re: When simple words are hard to find
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by Buggsy on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 05:06:04 AM AEST
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| Beautiful! What more can I say? |
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Re: When simple words are hard to find
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by corrupted_minds on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 06:16:59 AM AEST
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| good work |
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Re: When simple words are hard to find
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by pixie on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 06:21:22 AM AEST
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a wonderful write Tanmaya... you sure have some talent there
pixie xx |
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Re: When simple words are hard to find
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 07:30:25 AM AEST
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Simple, but wrought with delicate emotion.
Your image of a golden trail was just what this poem needed to make it work, although It doesn't dominate the piece, upon re-reading.
Very well done. |
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Re: When simple words are hard to find
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by Kie on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 09:11:31 AM AEST
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Gorgeous!
I loved this poem, I mean I REALLY loved this poem!
The title was perfect as well.
Kie : ) |
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Re: When simple words are hard to find
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 10:01:52 AM AEST
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This is so lovely. Soft and deeply caring as love truly is.
Rita |
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Re: When simple words are hard to find
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 12:47:51 PM AEST
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beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: When simple words are hard to find
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by katyqueen35 on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 02:12:58 PM AEST
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SWEET VERY SWEET....
GOOD WRITE..... |
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Re: When simple words are hard to find
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by carmen_queasy on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 03:11:47 PM AEST
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| truly beautiful |
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Re: When simple words are hard to find
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 03:54:43 AM AEST
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Beautiful! I love the concept of no words being needed, of spirits who understand each other so well. That to me is a very deep expression of love.
Excellent piece.
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Re: When simple words are hard to find
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by Wachumiri on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 06:31:14 PM AEST
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I love this one. Well, I loved the other ones as well, but this one is special. Sometimes words, no matter ow complicated, or how simple, cannot express the desire, the passion burning in your heart.
Come, take my hand and smile into my eyes,
whenever simple words are hard to find
Beautiful.
Take care. May love hold you tight.
David |
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