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You and Me
Contributed by
Dan666
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Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 05:05:51 AM in AEST
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Sometimes I feel like you don't care,
HELLO MY NAME IS DANIEL BLAIR!
Go over there and sit on that chair,
We are sometimes a good 'ol pair.
Do you love me, I love you?
That's a silly question, of course you do,
You and me it can't be true,
Argueing over things old and new.
All of the things you've done for me,
made me happy, cooked my tea,
I think we were meant to be.......................
Mother and Son
Copyright ©
Dan666
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2004-07-29 05:05:51]
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Re: You and Me
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 05:09:17 AM AEST
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interesting, its good you still care
PFR |
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Re: You and Me
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by Kie on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 09:09:01 AM AEST
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I liked the way this read. It was very smooth.
Very sweet as well that you would write about a mother and son relationship.
I'm glad to see you posting again.
Kie : ) |
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Re: You and Me
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by Dawny on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 03:11:04 PM AEST
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Awwhhhh This is a really sweet poem from a really sweet kid. You be nice to your Mum mate cos shes fab!!
Excellent poem, well done
Love Dawny xx |
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Re: You and Me
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 11:48:01 PM AEST
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keep working on it day by day, you and mum will always find a way, ...i really love this one, hugs n' love nessa
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